Originally Posted by Nostradamus

You been listening to eminem freestyles..


But anyway, the actual verse wasnt really saying anything at all.. No multies, half decent flow, and your lyrics had no substance.. Also concearning your PM, dont call your text freestyles, because their not.. Even keystyling is a weak term, when your writing something your writing something, writing it fast is still not freestyling for the simple fact that you can backspace.. Next rhyme you write, try and actually say something with your lyrics.. Give a message, or write a story.. Just try and give it some sort of direction instead of mindlessly going off on a tangent..

Goodluck..