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Old 01-18-05, 03:52 PM   #4
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Loved reading this drop, vocab was very good, described it in a vivid way. Good imagery, made me stand still here and there...Was definately feeling your flow, creative approach...Solid drop man!

The only friend of mine, would be the ones I see in the sky
The stars that light this path that I blindly walk through my night
And during my hours of darkness the stars aren’t there
These deadly clouds swallowed them whole, leaving me to walk blind
Through my path lined with lies and despair


^my favo part...

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