Voted For: MaRVJay1009

poetry2abeat........
your hated at this site so its best you leave,
you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves,
eehh ok opener here....hit decent....

after reading what i wrote you wished you declined,
your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind,
nice wordplay n punch here....good bar

couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak
cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats,
ok wordplay here.....kinda played concept though

marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject,
like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect,
set up line wasnt good...2nd line was nice....hit good

having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling,
but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling"
PLAYED....ive read this on this site 1000 times.....


MarvJay................
its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag?
nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag"
lol nice opener here.....hit hard

admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week......
when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH"
good wordplay here.....hit decent

u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me
i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........
most peeps wont get this....hit ok

your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL....
u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell"
nice all around bar here....hit hard

i bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE..
plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME"
lol nice closer and personal here....set up line wasnt too great


overall marvjay gets this for harder hitting punches and actually having a personal or 2 in his verse......structure was about even...wordplay was about even....just thought marvs punches hit harder.....return the favor.....PLEASE

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