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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Wow Marv Reachin Hotshh Level Kid Iss Nice....
Openor=Marv,Good Punch And Personal Shit Wass Hott
Strukture=Tie,Both Yall Shit Wass Easy Ta Read
Personals=Tie,You Both Had 1 Personal
Punches=Off Tha Back Marv,His Shit Wass Hot And They Hit Hard
Vokab=Tha Black Plague,Had Better Vokab Up Ya Vokab Both Yall
Wordplay=Marv All His Lines Had Somethin Ta Do With Tha Punch
Multies=Marv,Damn Tha Multies Wass Hot
Closer=Tha Black Plague,Marv Ya Shit Aint Rhyme AT Tha End
Overall Marv Took Thiss Hiss Punches Wass Hittin Like Hell An Ok Personal Good Wordplay And Multies......
u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u..
rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE"
^^^ Lol Shit Wass Mean As Hell
/V Marvjay1009 Rtf...................
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