Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
Lady gets this one, I felt her more in this topic she had better strucutre good worplay and she had me feeling as if I was in the topic and as if she was living in the topic herself. But u had a few stretched lines and this is what help lady get this one so over all lady gets my vote.
8/10
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