Voted For: Notorious Verses
I don’t mean to be cruel, but I don’t even need to half-ass
Nobody really cares about your ass like a GED English class
aight flow, not a good opener or punch..
Im takin this, so make like cannibal snakes and swallow your end
I mean how all the vets left, we just hope you follow the trend
the first half was sic, the last half was NOT a diss..
Truth is my sound is ill, but nobody wants to hear ya flow
You been on the net forever faggot!.and still got nothin to show?
aight personal, coulda been better…
How can these faggots be ill?..all the textees he beat were new
And quit talkin about amounts of skill, THATS between me and you
nice punch, the second could be a diss to yourself however..
Its torcher what im doin to this herb, Ive already topped ya diss..
Even judged by motivational speakers ya still wont get a vote of confidence
stretched… not hard hitting..
His net presence in text is a shame time to take you outta the limelight
Cuz you been exposin more 'gay bars' to us than San Fransico nightlife
best bar in your verse lmao…
Droppin a battle verse? Your sure to 'go down swingin', herb..
That means you like 'givin head on playgrounds' in lamens terms
stretched meta… no good.. Not personal whatsoever..
Bitch, biting my clothin style is the only way ya 'matchin me'..so plz quit
Im postin 1st, yet id never feed off ya verse..since I refuse to eat shit
first half is decent… shit lines are played but the second half was aight..
I got em scared, his heart beatin faster than doin home aerobics
and if I was ever scared of Notorious its cause I was homo-phobic
aight closer, the only other personal u had in here
I believe I voted on one of your battles before, Black Queen and it seems you still got a lotta filler lines.. You can use any of your lines on someone and just put their name in it.. You got a few unique personals.. Which I pointed out.. But your punches were VERY weak.. Ya flow was very good and metas were good but you need to make them into effective punches… but it was a decent verse overall…
Chick Has "No Sense Of Reality", Dis Bitch Beatin N.Verses?...C'mon Sis*
Da Queen Clearly Has No Respect Fo "Hip Hop", So Her Ass Voted Fo Skriptz*
^^^best opener, and best personal so far…lol
Similar Traits?...Na Ma Im Da "Red King", Is Dat Familiar To Ya
Cuz Even Da Girl In Ya Sig Symbolizes "Murder" Fo Ya*
^^nice.. Effective punch followed by a personal..
Enough Wit Da Sharades, Claims She Ko's All Bitches But Yet She's "Laid"
Ma, To Tell Ya Da Truth, A "Black Queen" Only Means Sumfin Wen Playin Spades
another nice personal.. Lmfao.. Nice multis.. Lines almost stretch tho
6-0? Impressive...Na Try 19-4....Broke Dis Whore Reference Dat Used To Reside In Authentik Intelligence
Now Unless U Condaleeza Rice, I Don Understand How A Black Queen Is In A "Twizted Government"
ya flow fa this was a lil’ messed up.. But nice personal nonetheless.. Lmao
Face Facts Ma Even In The Card Game's U Play, Da King Ranks Higher Than U
Traitor?...Hell Yea, She Played C.A.L.I Mad Nuff, But Noe She Want In On His Crew
BEST BAR in the battle.. This punch took the battle in my opinion..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172452
GET OFF MY DICK, I Went To Strikly Hood-U Followed, Twizted Government-Da Sig U Borrowed
I Swear, Ur On My PRICK So Much, Ull B Pregnant By TOMORROW!
another tight punch..second half was sic.. First half almost stretched playa
So Wats Ur Next Motive, Explosives?...Na "Black Queen" Da Deck Is Gone...
Call Lady Fiya, She Da Next Queen-Cuz Dis Bitch Has Been DETHRONED!
I disregarded ths bar since my name is in here.. First half still the best closer
Aight for yours… you had personals throughout the battle.. Which gave you the upper hand, your flow was consistent but fell off somewhere in the middle.. You brought some creative punches.. I seen a few multis. And ya metas were original.. You had sum faults I mentioned like stretching ya bars fa no reason.. Type in Times New Roman.. Not arial.. It makes ya verse look extra large and run on the next line.. This was pretty one-sided you had the punches and personals to take this battle in a possible KO.. Stay up and work on ya errors and both of you should be fine.. Nice battle you two..
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