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Old 01-18-05, 06:53 PM   #14
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline took this battle by a land-slide... he had sum metas with punches, ya closer was not very effective however.. but ya flow was nice, structure was nice...

best lines were:
u couldn't climb me if u packed heavy gear and a master drill,that's "sad still"//
i bet this kid's internet is slow as aol,and he's "buggin" out like a "virus" with a "fillet-of-fill"//
^^ha nice one.. one thing i must say to both of you, is that you both need to get more personal.. and lose the filler lines.. Hotstudalrt ya flow was aight, but ya structure not good at all... and you need to get more complex wit ya verse.. but wit that said i vote/ Adrenaline.. his stuff was complex and had a few punches that were enuff to take the win..
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