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Old 01-18-05, 07:14 PM   #18
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Voted For: Chuck Low

Javelin- what happened you had NO FLOW whatsoever, you basically wrote a story or something.. chuck low, u didn't come hard either however you had some personals using his profile (the cop) throughout ya verse and you had a flow.. but dun mention how u got more loses than wins.. just keep blazing ya opponent.. pretty one-sided.. but Chuck Low gets my vote..
Javelin, practice writin battle verses.. not stories.. diss ya opponent and that's all.. quit writin sentences if u need help go to the Tutorials on the first page..
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