Valor-

dope piece.. imagery was good.. story-line was good.. emotion was definately there.. probablt the best aspect of your verse.. decent imagery and structure... but overall dope piece

overall : 9/10

Mista_Auth3ntik:

you had a good verse too.. the emotion was perfect.. some lines didnt rhyme well though and the imagery wasnt too well it could have been better that was the biggest problem with your verse.. you didnt get descriptive enough

overall : 7/10

vote: valor

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