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Old 01-18-05, 10:37 PM   #30
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mURK-Ok, much elevation needed for you. Punches was played and not good, with no effect at all. Flow wasnt good either, fix the struture, dont space your bars fam. Stretchy lines homie, dont do that. Keep it "readable".





8-Ok you had some effective punches, personals was nice. Wordplay, you need that in your verse, along with multi'z. Punches is what out-stood in your verse.




overall=Hands down to 8, his punches did some effect on his opponent, nothing played and did not pre-write. Murk had no punches effect at all, too played and basic. Flow was messed up too, fix the struture "murk", also dont space your bars fam. I vote 8 cause he had effective punches, but still 8 much elevation process needed with you fam, Add wordplays and multi'z in your verse. Murk add some creative punches, wordpklays, and personals, also flow.

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