C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Originally Posted by final
lmao...good luck i hope everyone enjoys this read slapped together in a half hour, i wouldve spent more time on it but i got a lot more writing to do so this is my final verse take it or leave it...
it seems when im doing the right thing it just shatters dreams
a fabric of imagination good thoughts seeping through the seems
a scene brightly gleams into my eyes is it a disguise.......
no...its my wife raped and bloody releasing tears constant cries
i wake up it was just a dream or was it,shes not in bed next to me
i call her hoping to hear her voice but its isolated i start to grief
answering machine i play to hear the kidnappers voice on the speaker
5,000,000 pesos, where to drop is on a paper beside the heater
what the fuck?they got in while i was here? no sounds like a beeper?
nope...just the fact that im an ass a.k.a a heavy sleeper.......
back to the point nomore jokes this is serious time this is a topical
wouldnt want to hurt feelings with the "Emotions most important" obstacle
well fuck that im keying this quick emotions out of the question
if i lose oh fucking well then i bet ive learned a lesson.......
now really to get serious i cried and cried like the bitch that i am
i loved her more then the guy who loved em in "stan".......
anyway to cram this story from short to long not long to short
i decided to hunt the men down after all it was my last resort
got the 5 mil went to the spot in which u dropped the loot
the money for the fools who robbed my bitch and sneakers too
thats a fact saw them in black trucks gave them the cash they went back
i followed them to the hideout but i was loosin them, highway was packed
but i finally got there, a mansion crystal coated light was shining crazy
reflection from the light was eternal <a flip on talibs album now thats crazy
gathered my conscience and proceeded inside wooden double doors
this guy was weird had wood everywhere even walls with boats and oars
i found him...shoved a cricket inside his nostral he ran from me...
guys a bitch get back here so i could make your eyeballs bleed
it was carnage flipped the painting on the wall to hit his scalp
but he continued became stuck so he found another route
but i caught him this time wasnt goin nowhere at all from now on
yelled"GIMME MY BITCH BACK"saw a chess set and hit him wit a pawn
he died automatically then i saw the image stated in the beginnin of this verse
then i woke up again to re-enact the same thing,memories were dispersed
by the way on the reflection eternal part thats a album by talib kweli
peace good luck
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WtF?? You basiclly cheated whyte? cuz he only posted a weak 20 line verse against you since you posted a verse that even a newb could of beaten, i think flow should redo this because what final did seriously isnt fair
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