Valor

Emotion was definately there, storyline was predictable but it's a hard topic to write very creative. Vocab could've been a little better maybe but it was good though. Imagery was nice too, structure n flow were okay...Overall a solid drop, nothing too amazing in my opinion though, just very solid good job...


MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Emotion was very raw, got me thinking here and there about some things...Vocab was really good, found tight balance between complex and basic. I thought you could've used some more indepth imagery though and wasn't always feeling your flow. Structure was decent, your approach of the topic was bit more creative...personal too...

I vote for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ...

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