Wow, it's a shame that this is getting slept on. The emotion was raw, this was a very deep piece filled with hatred, pain, sadness but also strength...The vocab was straight to the point, had good wordplay in there. You got me focussed throughout the entire verse, had to keep on reading because of the way you described everything, so real, so pure...

My dreams still yearn for a respect a son deserves to earn
But the fact of reality is that you never will change
^loved 2 last lines...

Very deep drop! Loved it! Don't sleep on this people!

DQ

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