Voted For: •Para¶el•
alrite this in the end was an easy decision for me to make....
parallel was superior to dam in this battle, para has elevated well in topicals recently n came wiv a nice verse here...
para - flow was dope n neva went off point, structure good, vocab i liked alot and i felt a gud degree of emotion in there, good stuff fam
dam - neva seen ya do topicals before n this was o.k but i didnt think it rhymed very well first off....example =
'Evil genie is not specificaly the satan,its all us women and men
were like bee's and cinanum,we dont fit,we dont understand'
^^^this doesn't rhyme....structure n emotion were o.k but out classed here, keep elevating
pz
can y'all hit this topical battle wiv final, thx...
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