Odi et Amo
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I'll give some feedback on your verse...I LOVED the way you approached the topic, the emotion was very deep. Vocab was tight, had some good multis in there which was a plus point of course. Structure was good and definately feeling your flow in this drop. Imagery was nice and you described the guy's struggle very well, could feel his pain...Dope drop for sure!
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