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Voted For: C.A.L.I
Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
^^nice punch/personal
Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
^^decent punch..good personal
'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
^^weak punch....decent personal
'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
^^damn nice multi's and personal
This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
^^good punch...okay personal
you came pretty well equipped with personals.....they were non stop......good to see personal usage.....good flow......structure i would say is your biggest flaw....your punches were good....some werent but the majority were.....like how you threw in punches with the personals to up the effect of them....goos drop....pretty solid cept for structure.....
CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
^^nice humerous punch/personal
So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
^^nice personal....decent punch
Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
^^decent punch..could been worded a lil better
cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
^^nice wordplay.....decent punch
atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
^^good punch...but self glorify brought it down some
aight you had a pretty decent verse.....had some good personals....a little humor is always nice to see......you had better structure.....i think you coulda worded you punches to up the effect of them a lil more....but you had good flow too.......not bad just not good enough for my vote 
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