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Old 01-19-05, 03:43 PM   #24
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i read disordas 2nd verse
not much to vote on, landslide victory in my opinion lol

emotion-lady fiya, disorda had emotion in her verse too but it just wasnt as much as lady fiya in anyway...fiya brought a lot more with her lines and descriptions...

imagery-lady fiya, wasnt feelin any in disordas verse lady brought a great amount of vocabulary and it helped describe what was happening tremendously...a lot of props here on the vocab too...

the rest was basically fiya, i actually thought disorda had a better flow since her lines were shorter for a better syllable count but lady got the other aspects...

good luck to both
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