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Voted For: Godz Angel
RuffRidah has never experienced the roller coaster ride Before,
He has now uncoverd what hides under the floor, and out the door,
This line is aiight!! that's pretty much it
The real whore who lives in his soul, and realizes hes whack,
You couldn't quit crack, but you will be sure to quit this rap,
fake personal and doesn't really heat nothing up...u should try to heat it up in the very beginning so the reader gets hooked
After I show you the side of the demons in the real dark flow
You would just step back and pleade for me to let mercy show,
this is OK... it kind of starts something then has no effect but keep working on it
You use the same lines over and over but you aint that kool,
And when this verse has been united, Faith is what i'll rule.
this is just self glorification and it's not much if the other guy beats this with a punch...don't use too much self glorification rhymes in a battle!!
You pull out a pad to make it seem like you have a mind there,
When you start to write you only see whack shit on thread hair.
this is probably the first good punch u have and it was effective keep it up
As soon as you walk into the crosshair, You will become dead,
And go crazy with my voice in ya veins, and runnin in ya head.
this was an ok closer.
ruffryder was aiight but he came harder...good battle though..
and wats wit da longass sig?
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