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Old 01-19-05, 04:46 PM   #8
Metaskriptz
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Practically every damn line I spit, is memorable, your never…
…demanding quotations
I’ll offend you, like telling paraplegics to give a standing ovation
Pretty Decent Opener
J says he’s ‘sik’, well damn, this kid only has the flew
Guess you thought that 8 Mile was practically for you
Hmm Don't Know about that One
Wrap your tongue around your face, so you can stop…
…‘spitting’ game
Choose between, J Gutta or pure wackness, who cares, really…
…they’re both the same
Nice Closner...I Like
Overall 6.7/10
Pretty Decent Verse. You Came with nice Balance and Structure was pretty Off But Its not about the structure its how well you spitted and The Flow was good..


Ayo,
Get it straight dawg, im a blood and a Christian,
So u best start respectin my culture and religion,

Cuz I bet 2 hallow tips will definitely alter ya vision//
No. No .No. No., Not a good Opener
have you like ball tryouts, and cut failures,
black on black cap, wit da black chuck tailors//
Like the Clothes Style But No...Not a good Verse
I like to see Mc’s die, and get tha wordz from tha priest,
Ma vatoh, Skriptz, iam leavin bitches like you deceased//
Too Plain..Could Have DOne Better
Tha skriptz I write, are some of tha most famous plays,
Full court press this nigga, make him change his plays,
This is the best Line you Have..Pretty Good
Get religious on his ass and make him change his ways//
U look through tha barrel of my 9, and u see tunnel vision,
I got guns like twistaz, that leave some funnels in him//
No..no...No..Nooooooo Stop..Not a good Closiner

I guess you Learning and You just barly Need to Start Elevating and you will be their.. It takes time like it took time for everone else..Next time check who you battle against and make sure their on the same level as you. But you did have flow but everything else except for structure was horrible..Im not sayign skriptz is good but I am saying try battling someone a little bit easier Ok Tata
4/10
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