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Old 01-19-05, 06:32 PM   #43
Parallel
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yo man that was a good verse your emotion war there and your crwtivty was there but i wasent really feeling where the imagery was going to?...but the vocab n stucture was good the stucutre was alright not the best but it was good n you flowed well but it was just that imagery that wasent there to give you this win..and a bit of the stucture i feel you can do better and also you were on topic good..no hate

Prem:
alright i liked your creativty and emotion and your imigery was very well done and also you had some alright vocab but kinda fell iunno but it was alright not the best vocab but what i liked was your stucutre and flow mostly. but i really feel your creativty and imigery got you this win..no hate

VOTE/Prem
if some way my vote is not properly rigth then f u people cuz i vote explained well to many hoes say i didnt explain it right...so strobe dotn bother
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