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01-19-05, 07:34 PM
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Hells Fire
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i liked it also gotta give ya a 8/10 you told the story had some flow,rhymes stuck to each other...big ups kid. The structure was alright changed it up alittle but it was koo.if ya want any more feedback just let me know
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