wow, that is very amazing, i loved everything in it, I could definately feel the emotion in this piece.. My favorite part was the alst 2 lines in this poem..

But the fact of reality is that you never will change

Signed,
Your Son (or as you see it "Just another name")

Now that is something that I have never seen before.. You haven't been told this in a long time, but you still contain potential in you to become better then you are right now.. looking forward to more piece..

9/10

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