damn very very good and reative the imgery was hella good and you used very good emotion and vocabulary i loved the topic you did and the way you said your petry this is more peortry in a way to me cuz its very emotional and good i liked how you used wordplay to express lines like these bars:
I wish i was hollywood, so i could make you into a movie..
so when I lacked motivation, I'd use your beauty to move me..
^^if its not wordplay then i was taught wrong...*cough cough Nos* but yea tell em if it is wordplay cuz how you used hollywood and movie iunno kinda seems liek wordplay then the nest line with Motivation and move me...kinda creative anyway but thos were my fav lines there...peace

check my new collab coming soon when ever final is done his verse but it will be good not My best but its alright...but yea check it, it will be in my sig when its done...if you want check my shity ass single The Judgementday but i think its wack..lmao

but good job...i dont rate people anymore...but you were damnen good...Peace