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lines that stuck out to me!!
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Originally Posted by In-Vision
I know that in ..
and every word you ever said to me, echoes in my memory..
and my love glistens like a heart etched from emery..
I wish i was hollywood, so i could make you into a movie..
so when I lacked motivation, I'd use your beauty to move me..
Or atleast I could capture your eyes as the moon hits 'em
Exposing your thoughts, wishin we were in my room kissin..
runnin my fingers through your hair, you whisper in my ear
"I'm not ready", shh you dont have to speak, we can just lay here..
this is just what I remember, it's been a while since i've seen you..
I remember sayin "I just want your love" you replied with "me too"
and Now i'm stuck writin this letter, with no way to send it..
you don't even exist, this whole time i've been pretendin..
I guess if i wrote it, I could feed my craving for unity..
because even the loveless, knows love has no immunity..
But it's okay, I'll seal this up, and lock it way untill I need to..
I guess i'll have to be patient waiting for the day I finally meet you.. |
over all 8/10 shit was really hot i cannot hate and i will not hate i feel u onthis one man u did your thing keep it up!!
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Where Im From! Cabrini Green!
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1
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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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