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Old 01-19-05, 11:21 PM   #20
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Hells fire-Damn imaginary was good hoime, flow was decent and nice, very readable. You lost touch in emotion,, i didnt feel any emotions coming from your verse.


verabl- Hi,You had some good emotion, the imaginary from you was good and very decent. vocab lost touch in that category, but emotion and flow was good.


v/verbal abuse won this by emotion and flow
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