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this is aight....you just need to work on emotion...and your presence...
its like your reading.....oyu need to memorize your verses....
nice beat for the topic....
yeah you have nice quality....just try to use more emotion..and actaully spit your shit..dont read.....but good shit..for your first song....
chorus...could have had alot more anger or somehting in it.....but nice lyrics
all i can say.....for right now
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