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Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.Is Verse

Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
^ good opener with the name flip punch and personal

Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
^ aight punch could be worded better though

'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
^ liked this punch

'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
^ lol @ the fux a lot (punch) lol na was good kinda Limp Bizkit shit there

This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
^ Nice closer good wordplay aight punch/personal

Overall: C.A.L.I
Some nice wordplay good useage of personals flow was good some aight punches all round good verse from ya

FuxJustAWords Verse

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
^ LOL decent opener but the Wendys thing beginning to get played now but nice anyway good personal

So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
^ stretched...punch was average cattle/battle basic rhyme coulda been better

Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
^ nice punch/personal however stretched again affected flow

cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
^ worked as a punch kinda personal wordplay on the blacklist was aight blocked the N word good move in my opinion people get funny on the white sayin N thing (which i agree wit)

atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
^ Wendy's flippin extreme there nice punches from personals but the .................................wasn't needed it jus fux'ed up ya structure in my opinion

Overall: FuxJustAWord
Another good verse jus as good only thing is i didn't feel your layout it effected ya structure and flow and in text it is important people do look for that and it slipped in this battle some decent personals but the amount of people who use Wendy's on C.A.L.I is startin to get boring...

V/C.A.L.I No battles open Therefore No 3 day RTF limit