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Old 01-20-05, 11:42 AM   #14
Dex
Gods Of War! -yeah im one
 
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Hook is cool. Catchy and clever. Good vocab and multis.

Abstrakt verse: Fucking heavy bro. Loving it, You dropped a bomb, nice use of the topic there.

This stuck out to me:
"Pen To Page Wage War With Ink, Infect Threw Heads Of Slaves...
The Led Gives Way, Crumble Difference In Man And Connect On Stage..."


Ya second verse wasnt as good but still cool. Good use of multis from the start of it

SV: Nothing short of amazing! the verse blew me away!!!! I dont really know wat to say. The topic was follwed superbly, the vocab was cool, the whole verse just rocked!

Babylon: kept the pace up well. I was feelin ya verse no doubt. nice multis and vocab and topic kept up. Well-thhought-out verse man.


Truly superior fellas. Keep it up.

RTF in my battles pls fam
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