Voted For: MaRVJay1009
WHOA WHOA WHOA marv got this hands down
assassin ur shyt was pretty dope. but the first line. was mad played. MJ and mic lines are gettin played. the rest was decent. your best line was
Come on you from da Queens?Well i see why cuz ya surely aint a King
I just saw ya "Ass" walking out of a gayclub.Maybe youre a Drag Queen?
Your structure and flow really killed the verse though
7.3/10
Marv
Dope structure and flow. this shit was fire dawg. you're doin the damn thang now. your punches hit em hard. haha at the closer FIRE and good multi's
best line:
so get off my dick fagget i got DiFFERENT TEXT Da ORDER...
while im in a benz you'll be in a "iNTERNET-EXPLORER".....lol
no errors in this wun. a few filler lines but rest was fire
8/10
vote: marv
return da fav ya'll
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