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Old 01-20-05, 04:57 PM   #7
Parallel
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Guv'nor
i liked your verse but the grammer was kinda off and your stucture was a lil off but nothing bad the punches were there but they were weak....i wasent feeling your verse really most of the reasons were punches and vocab you lacked on being creative and it just wasnt there for you...i didnt feel that...no hate

Konflickz:
damn you elevated a lil well nto really but i see you controll stucture better but anyway yes stucture was good and you used soem good short words i guess ill say good vocabulary and soem tight metas and wordplay n there...very consitant on the punches VERY..and you were just very creative i liked that....good job...pz

Opener: Kon
Closer: Kon
punches: Kon
Metas: Kon
Stucutre: Kon
Flow: Guv
creativty: Kon

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