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Old 01-20-05, 05:02 PM   #15
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vote/ Mista

flow - Tie : Mista had some lines that didn't quite rhyme and that hurt the flow a little bit, but then Valor switched some lines up to make them rhyme at the end, which actually hurt the flow. pretty good from both though.

Imagery - Mista : Valor would have taken it, if his entire piece was like the ending, I was picturing myself contemplating life or death with the gun on the table. But Mista had decent imagery all the way through.

Emotion - Mista : Really felt alot from Mista on this one, just all the shit this kid is going through, and it really got to me. Valor didn't really strike me with much emotion.

Beginning/End - Tie: Both were decent, but like final said, the gun thing is used alot.

*just a little note, Lyric and I had this topic on RB, and he was really good with the topic, and wrote about Smoking, which is killing him but he's still living...ie Living Sucide