Voted For: Pop Lotty

wicked~some of ya lines were good, but i wasnt feeling the mcdonalds lines,lol, your lines seemed to be too long as well, like you were lookin for more filler, this verse wasnt bad, but nothing really stuck out and made me say wow, but nonethe less good job..keep at it, i felt this wasnt strong enough for the win..1
pop lotty~your verse was short, but to the point, you had some personals that are verifiable, liked the cocaine line,and the declaration of independence lines about his long verses, good, creative punches, i thought your opener could have been better, but you made up for it with the ending 2 bars, it got better as i read on, nice job...1

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