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Old 01-20-05, 10:21 PM   #18
fluidmoon
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Voted For: Phantom

I enjoyed reading this battle..lol, some great lines in here...
phantom~strong opener, nice flow to this, liked the punch on his hometown, and your strongest ones were the kurt cobain lines, nice, and the last bar, again, good personals, lol @ the ending line,i like your style with the questions theme, creative too.this was a strong verse overall, good job.1
Babylon~lol, this was good too, i liked your last bar the best, this is hard to judge,but i think that phantom had stronger lines here, barely, but i just felt his more, and this battle was an enjoyable read...but good job as well, stay up.1
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