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Old 01-21-05, 01:04 AM   #21
eph
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Voted For: C.A.L.I

v/ CALI

i dont even like you. this is cause id hate to see someone as wack as marv win this battle. i still have wit, even though i have no respect for you. your verse was good. best lines:

'lines so stretched....skins to view um!"

you came hard with every lines, some heavier than others, but collectively smashing. a bit hyphy, but you cleared it all up with every ending, nice closure, next time dont tell a story before you spit, no need to jusify your punches, just let em hit...and let people vote on the visual facts alone. nice drop.


marv: woot. im not saying it was horrible, im just saying it wasnt good enough here, you need to battle lower ranks a bit more, before you step to the few that claim to own the site. damn emp. but you came decent, nice punches, but they didnt clarify your personals, i didnt see much person faultiness flowing in your piece, but you still came with something, put up a very possible fight to win, but didnt cut it. next time my bets on you.

vote: C.A.L.I.

peace, DO NOT return the favor, thats not why i vote.
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