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Better than you..
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and this shit is slept on!? u showed me the start of this a while ago on AIM and i told you to link me when u post this. its dope no fuckin lies straight fire bro like wild. i even have his permission to put this on an audio track. and thats word. but you are a very gifted writer. i really like this piece. it has a kool twist at the end too which i didnt expect which is always good. really dope piece of writing here. u leave more than 90 percent of the text heads on RV for dead. keep em coming. 9/10
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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