Thread: "If I Die"
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Old 01-21-05, 01:23 PM   #3
Parallel
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i liked this the verses were on point and good flowing and the effects you gave it was good this was one of the best ive seen from you and it is good i liked the creativty and effects you gave alot but the chorus was kinda fucked....iunno but it coulda been done better even by you it could of been done better i just wasn't really feeling that part as much as the verses you had but dont worry about the chorus its still good....good job i like this alot...

damn lots of rv cats got good potential to be somewhere...damn
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