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..Rv Sucks..
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Voted For: Indeph
Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws
Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws
^^weak punch and self glorification = wack
Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost
Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off
^^okay punch...lil humor
I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic
Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic
^^again self glirification=wack decent punch
Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits
And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith
^^wack punch and again self glorification=wack
Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best
Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast
^^again self glorification=wackkkk...weak punch
basically your verse was weak....really dont see why u battled a vet........your verse had more self glorification than it did punches........you need to add personals to have a better verse........work on that.......if your lines werent centered your structure would be off.....you flow was good........but your punches were lacking.....try to direct them more to your opponent
I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig)
cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor
^^didnt rhyme at the end...but nice personal/punch
TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry
how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci
^^nice personal again....
you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege..
you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend)
^^seemed forced....decent punch
check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise..
Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name..
^^nice personal/punch
yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you..
I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who?
^^nice punch.....
aight you came with a pretty solid drop..........definately had way better punches because you directed them towards him more.........you fit the punches with all the personals you used......had some creative personals..........structure was a lil off but could use some work.........and you didnt self glorify 
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