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Knock out kings fur life
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good topical and this one was hard to make a decision on so I had to go with you becuase I felt the emotion and it gave me a good imagry up in this. the opener-closure was execellent and it was as if I was in it my self. the rhyming was good and this is what got it for u.
Once upon an unusual day a man has somehow found his way
Relay it back to the day that he had no longer lived in dismay
He found himself impeading the spot to become one to lead
None could see that his actions deniably in itself was greed
Feeding off his intentions he had kept his secret unmentioned
His pension grows and leaves his old succesors suspended
dreaded the truth to his succesion he just boasted and gloated
His selfconfidence coasted causing him to make lies sugar coated
His executive poisition grew without preminitions from actions chose
Drove himself to new places, on the news he talked in captions closed
Facts arose about him and when confronted he froze with confusion
7/10
and hit up on my links peace
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