yall could work on using better stucture and shortening the words you use each line try using around 10 i use about 6-14 thats what i do depends on the stucture gotta make it all work ya know...but yea i usually see C bo with good stucutre but flamin bars just work on that ight...

flamin bars
your verse was alright nothing great in it ive seen alot better form you i guess its jsut that TG aint really anything anyway...lmao...but try workin on that flow and stucture i said jsut up there and shit and then try being creative with metaphores n shit then you might drop good next time....keep doing yo thang you were better then me when i was a newb 5 monthes ago.

CBo
you know it was good i liked your lines n shit but i just thought you rushed your stucutre so it lacked there and shit but it flowed all your creativty was pretty good n shit i just didnt feel the stucuture....keep doing yo thing

good OM...

return the fav i droped a new OM links in the sig...peace