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Old 01-22-05, 12:17 AM   #10
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Voted For: Os1ris

this one goes to os1ris for better punches and personals. All the punches weren't hittin to me though so had yours been shorter you probably wouldn't have won but you had so many lines that some were bound to be good. I wasn't feelin the silence line but the you took my plans was good. the critical condition line was pretty weak but the ill joints/arthritis line was good. the mookie blaylock line was decent and the writer's block line was good. The shear length proly took this one for you even though fuck this life's whole verse was good you had more good punches cause yours was longer. Structure was a little off but to me structure doesn't really effect the value of a verse cause i can read anything. I would've liked to see more from fuck this life though cause he could've had you. anyway return the favor.

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