Word 2 the emotion.. This shit was dope, too bad its not an audio track.. -_-

Nice shit nonetheless though.. Good use of multi syllable rhymes, the flow was all on point.. Lyrics were nice. I dont have much advice I can give you since were probably at about the same level of writing technique.. But I did enjoy this a lot man..

Get a mic soon so we can make a track lol..

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