Voted For: poetry2abeat

marv

its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag?
nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag"
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wasnt the best opener,no punch.spelling mistakes made it not make sense.

admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week......
when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH"
^^^^^weak punch, not a solid rhyme.no personal.

u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me
i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........
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another weak punch, medium rhyme. not the best.

your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL....
u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell"
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allright punch,

bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE..
plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME"
^^allright personnal, but its a bit of a gimme.feel me? I mean I could of predicted you would use that line from a mile away.



poetry2abeat
your hated at this site so its best you leave,
you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves,
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good opener,nice punch

after reading what i wrote you wished you declined,
your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind,
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medium punch,a bit played.

couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak
cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats,
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good bar right here, nice punch. funny as fuck.

marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject,
like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect
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I didnt get this 100% only cause I dont real;ly knwo who aritha franklin is. so I have no comment on this bar.

having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling,
but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling"
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dope closer, you killed him here.
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