Voted For: Indeph
Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws
Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws
um..weak here, punch didn’t really land here
Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost
Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off
2nd line just sound gay there
I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic
Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic
decent multi’s here…an okay punch
Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits
And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith
weak punch…didn’t reall connected on here
Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best
Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast
with breast? Wtf…no closer wasn’t good
overall you had decent multi’s up in there, punches weren’t
really connecting on that one, especially the last line, but overall
u had the flow, vocab and structure, just that the punches weren’t
reall there thoug…no hate
I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig)
cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor
decent opener…punch line kinda landed here
TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry
how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci
nah, kinda weak punch were, wasn’t feeling it
you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege..
you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend)
good punch, nice persona on here too…
check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise..
Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name..
good persona here, decent punch, kinda connected though
yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you..
I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who?
closer was kinda weak here, but it was aight
overall you had some nice persona’s up in there, the punches, well
some of them were on point, and some were weak here, you had the
flow, which was good, the vocab was okay except for some parts and
the structure was aight, overall you took this 1 in my opinion though, punches
came harder than Legend’s to me it did though
rtf Indeph
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