Voted For: Black Queen

alright i peeped both verses

I daughter Hoz:
you had an ok verse. but the vocab wasnt there. your punches would of been better but you had a bad set up. the structure was bad and the flow was sorta off. overall this verse was decent
6/10

Black Queen:
umm your structure is not good. dont make your lines soo big. try and shorten them. you had good use of vocab and punches thats why you won this battle. shit was pretty decent
7/10

vote: bQ

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