Voted For: 50hater_killer

50 hater: Cool verse bro. Opener was good but it should rhyme really, lessened the quality of it a bit but it was still a good punch. Closer was good. I liked that. Better than his aswel. A good solid punch that hit. Some real good punches in ya verse there. Was some lines i thought were real good:

"c.gosht this aint no child movie casper was retired back in 99.
Ur rhymes are slow and my rhymes will merk u until u go senile" -This was cool. Your best line i think.

some good metaphors but i didnt see any personals or wordplay there really. You can still elevate yet but good none-the-less.


C.Ghost: I dont want this to come off too harsh but i really wasnt feeling ya verse much at all. You said murk far too many times, i think it was only bout three or so but it was noticeable. To be honest with the opener you used:

"Ima murk u cuz ill put 50 in u, and kill this hater
C.ghost, u cant c me but ill c u later"

You desered to lose this. Your punches were not only weak they were primitive. You have got a lot to learn bro but you can only get better.

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