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Knock out kings fur life
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IP:
Voted For: Personify
I think personify took this topical,
I felt his emotions more on this one as if I was getting stripped of my freedom scary huh
his strucutre was good his worplay was iight tho it could work on it but it was ok his rhyming was good vocab was execellent and these are the things I liked in this topical.
They strip us and tell us how we should look a European bully
They speak in a foreign tongue so we do not understand fully
Life within this room is all of my thoughts
I ponder on the pain and pleasure that it has brought
These chains depress me and keep my personality shadowed
I am not the leader of this trend and yet I am still followed
Emotion repressed by people's unneeded fears,
It cannot be stopped because of their shedding of tears.
My feelings and body are exposed as I am whipped like a slave
8.1/10
return the fav on my links peace
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