not bad ive seen better flow from you troop if you shortened the liens a lil mroe like you ususally do then it would be tight..but tis alright ntohign to great but dont ever take ratings form peopel alrigth its reatdrd even if soemone says your a 5/10 like guranteed did dont listen you probably did a 7 here or even a 2 it depends who leaves feed...but shit just keep doing your thang your good and shit i like the creativty and metaphores you use in each line or bar...very good...then the vocab was alright coulda been better..always soemthign can be better but jsut keep doign yo thang...
peace

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