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Knock out kings fur life
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IP:
Voted For: ~Babylon~
Hands down babylon gets this one. his emotion was good and he had better vocab some of ur stuff was overplayed but keep working on it dog. his structure was good he had some good lines and his multis and imagry was execellent. here is what got u this
Livin' life and learning lessons, despite life's agressions
fights with in, its mental supression, sentimental sessions
wita psychiatrist forcing out feelings, tormenting and revealing
scorching yet concealing, feeling con'd by how its appealing
now I'm dealing, with what i've got from a life not worth living
this knife n cursid sinning, cutting wrist, how worse is it gitting
soon its thoughts of thrills, drinking alchole and lots of pills
6.6/8
hit up on my links please peace
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