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Voted For: Personify
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Good Ish Kid, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Decent Some Parts Kind Of Faded But Others Came Back, Your Vocabulary Was Nice, Some Multi's Was Here Not Alot But Pretty Decent In A Way
Your Opener Was Very Good, But Your Middle Was Best Part Of Your Verse, I Really Enjoyed Reading This Verse Coz It Was True All Through Out It...9/10
Personify
Alright, Man Nice Your Opener Came Out, Basically You Lined Every Bar Up In Order To Make It So Ppl Could Understand, One Of The Things Final Lacked, Also Had A Copious Ammount Of Good Vocabulary, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Decent In Some Bars, But Not All....Also Some Multi's In Here...And That Meta Made It Well, I Enjoyed Reading This More Then Finals Coz In Reality You Made More Since In Your Verse...And The Use Of Reality To Describe Reality Was Deep, For You Get A Perfect 10 Man Nice Verse...10/10
Vote=Personify
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