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Old 01-22-05, 07:07 PM   #3
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aight this post was 'ok' but nothin special. i liked most of tha lines but tha killing/dissin topic aint real to me unless you really express your anger or at least say a person's name.some of your lyrical content was sketchy and your vocab was kinda basic but still it's decent.


*if eminem and bubba sparxxx got the fury of sharks
then i can spit too*
i just have to bust through the racial slurr
even though i'm so unsure i must endure
*i keep on spittin' til' everything becomes a blurr
so as i pull out da gun this song is done*

these lines with tha * around it didn't have a line that rhymed with 'em and that pretty much threw the ending off but i still give it a 6.5/10. keep droppin & return tha favor.1.
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